3 months ago I lived one of most terribles days.
It was a beautiful tuesday (I haven't classes) and I went to the service attention at Volkswagen agency. Then when I wanted to travel from the agency to my father's work ¡¡I didn't have change to get into the Metrobus station!!
So I decided to change my unique 500 pesos bill. For along 1 hour I was looking for someone who has change or someone who wanted to change my bill but I hadn't much success. Then I had to bought a 100 Pesos cellphone card but the young man who was the seller hasn't change and he gave me 400 Pesos. I tought: I'm lost!!
At the end of the story I found a clothes shop. In that place I meet a beautiful and friendly girl who finally saved myself.
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Hello Roy
ResponderEliminarnice story, I could imagine your suffering as I was reading. You could have included the time factor (e.g. you could have mentioned if you had to be somewhere at a certain time, or "the clock was ticking and I still couldn't leave the area").
There are many errors you could have easily corrected if you had used Word:
"terribles days" = terrible days
"tuesday" = Tuesday
etc.
Your grade: 16/20